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These days many people leave their country to work abroad and take their family with them. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend?

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It is true that people these days are leaving their country and are migrating to developed countries for better job opportunities and they prefer to take their family members along with them due to many reasons.
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isadvantages of
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ob or higher study may feel
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 due to the cultural diversity and
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 feel alone or fall sick
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, people feel safe and secure if they are with their friends or family members and
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. Despite these advantages, the primary disadvantage associated with
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rend is that it puts
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urden on the pocket of earning member.
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, living and medical expenses in developed nations are very high
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people who live with family, it becomes tough for them to save money for future needs.
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, if an individual is working alone he/she can share accommodation, car, heating expenses with friends and colleagues and save
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 money while a separate house with all basic amenities is required to cope up a family. In conclusion, the primary benefit of living with family is that an individual
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Topic Vocabulary:
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  • cultural sensitivity
  • globalized
  • social network
  • acculturation
  • extended family
  • professional development
  • language barriers
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