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Today’s schools should teach their students how to survive financially in the world today. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.

#today’s #schools #students #world
Educational institutions play a vital role in the development of
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individuals, and I strongly agree that schools should educate their students about financial survival. In
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I will be exploring the importance and benefits of
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 skill.
Firstly
, I will discuss the need for the students to acquire
this
 knowledge, and
secondly
, I will consider the impacts of not knowing about financial survival. Generally, schools will teach all the basic concepts based upon the grade level, as the grade increases so
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 the difficulty of their lessons. But the saddest part of today’s education system is not that effective when comes to financial survival. For an instance, schools should teach about taxation process and ethics,
this
 will help the students to calculate their monthly expenditure and other things which involves money.
Moreover
, finance is a part and parcel of daily life, so it is
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necessary for any student to have
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etter life in
this
 calculative world.
On the other hand
, educational institutions do not bother to teach
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practical skills like financial survival for all the students. Because these organizations are more focused on the student’s marks, so they just train them to memorize the correct answers in order to secure full marks. To illustrate, students learn only from their textbooks, so right after their schooling
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they will face
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ot of difficulties as their theory knowledge will not give proper guidance to survive.
As a result
, students lose their confidence and easily depressed based upon their financial circumstances, but
this
 can be easily avoided by learning how to survive financially. To conclude, financial survival skills are important in
this
 fast-paced world. And in my opinion, it is essential for the students to learn about financial survival skills right from their schooling.
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