2. Some people think children should have mobile phones, others disagree. Discuss both sides and give opinion.

Learning new languages have always fascinated a lot of people. Most of the people nowadays feel that unlike traditional approach of
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a dialect from a
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teacher,
this
can now be done using online applications or watching movies and
series
in that particular
language
to which I completely agree. In fact, people in my country opt for
such
options as they feel it is quite economical and more fun. It is reasonable to say that the evolution brought about by the
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has impacted every area including the way people have moved to
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anything new
such
as a
language
. There are multiple applications available online or
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stores either free or
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minimal cost.
Such
apps provide interested people to communicate with each other and help in learning each others' lingo as per the interest.
Moreover
, there are multiple quizzes and questionnaires designed in them with which
one
can easily evaluate themselves. I have myself learnt the basics of French- a foreign
language
, by
one
of
such
apps without any hassle or exorbitant tuition costs.
Consequently
, these apps have gained a lot of popularity around as well since they are not high on pockets and people can easily make up their minds to opt for them
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unlike a classroom learning which
on the contrary
is a tough decision making
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ask for many. Apart from
this
, entertainment media
such
as movies and
series
on which people spent a lot of their idle time becomes a great means to practice and learn the
language
. With the help of subtitles and audio provided in them,
one
can easily understand all the aspects of a
language
such
as how the words are written and spoken along with correct slang. Not only
this
turns as a beneficial use of time but
additionally
,
such
way of learning is more effective and enjoyable,
thus
opted by most of the people.
For instance
, my mother who was not a good English speaker can now speak very well in English as she used to spend most of her time watching English movies and
series
even during her mundane tasks at home.
Thus
, it would be right to say that international entertainment like movies,
series
or music are great ways of learning an unknown
language
. To conclude, I believe that with the world modernization, no
one
is bound to old means of learning a dialect
that is
from a well-qualified teacher but
infact
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in fact
can learn it from many other
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like
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nternet and international entertainment media which is easily available these days.
Furthermore
, a majority of people opt for these options as they find it much more convenient, effective and economic.
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