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Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school Do the advantages outweigh disadvantages?

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Learning a new
language
 will always help us. If the particular one is in demand, it will bring us a good job or it will be useful for travelling or expanding our literature knowledge. Meanwhile, many think that learning a new
language
 from a very young age will help to learn it faster. I agree with
this
. We all know English is a connecting
language
 that most people in the world speak. So, in many non-English speaking countries, they educate their children to learn it from the very beginning.
For instance
 in India, schools start teaching English from kindergarten itself.
Likewise
, there are many other languages that have a high demand in the job market. French, Chinese are other famous languages apart from English.
Also
, As per new scientific research, young minds easily adopts for learning new words and alphabets.
However
, a student who is above 15 years of age struggles to learn new alphabets if it were introduced to him in that stage. Due to the over demand for English, French & Chinese. People forget to concentrate on their mother tongue.
This
 often lands in a situation that one is neither fluent in foreign
language
 nor their native one.
For example
, consider a child that learns English and sidelines learning its mother tongue. That kid will not have confidence in speaking either of the languages. According to Time Of India's latest survey among school students, they found that there is a 2% increase in reading books other than the school lesson.Sadly, there is
also
 a dip of 0.25% in reading regional
language
 books. Even though it is a matter to worry,
this
 is a negligible amount. On other hand, a survey conducted by a leading job search engine Indeed states that most of the students who are multilingual are most preferred by HRs. So, based on the above-discussed facts that, students who start to learn foreign sounds when they are very young, masters it soon and, even though learning a foreign
language
 restricts kids to learn their mother tongue to some level, it is evident that it is an important tool in terms of finding jobs. I prefer to learn a foreign
language
 at a very younger age.
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The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

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