When a country develops its technology the traditional skills and the ways of life die out. It is pointless to try and keep them alive. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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Some people believe that due to new inventions, nations are gradually phasing out their ancient skills and lifestyles and it would be meaningless to preserve them.
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ntegral part of human nature which would remain with them forever.
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ain objective is to develop the existing skills. Modern innovation cannot change the culture and lifestyle of the people.
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good use of the technological
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they would remain grounded to their lifestyles.
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various technological development, businessmen prefer keeping their daily accounts in physical form.
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values and lifestyle would always give them
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comfort to operate and remind them about their identity.
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, technical upgrades would enable individuals to scale up their existing skills but it is never intended that person should give up on their existing ones.
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purpose of
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calculation. It never stops
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erson from performing oral calculations.
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, the main objective of technological innovation is to facilitate the existing skills rather than putting them down. To conclude, modern innovations created by various nations are bringing out new skill sets and lifestyles.
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ain purpose of it is to enhance the existing values, cultures and lifestyles rather than putting them away.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Technological advancement
  • Efficiency
  • Global connectivity
  • Cultural identity
  • Diversity
  • Innovation
  • Coexist
  • Sustainable
  • Eco-friendly
  • Energy-intensive
  • Practical skills
  • Self-sufficiency
  • Homogenize
  • Preservation
  • Global diversity
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