The first car appeared on British roads in 1888. By the year 2000 there may be as many as 29 million vehicles on British roads. Alternative forms of transport should be encouraged and international laws introduced to control car ownership and use. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.

The effectiveness of using
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and laws to restrict personal
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uses. Less
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meaning less pollution which is good for better human life. If we bring down the
car
uses
then
it will be good for our environment
also
it will reduce the consumption of fossil fuel.
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ar in a given day will actually reduce 2% of a days pollution. Public
transport
must be encouraged in order to reduce the traffic jam and it will be a cheap
transport
as well
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, it will change the daily routine. Some people think
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handy. You can not rely on the
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which is not in your control and not comfortable like your own
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it can be changed in future which will be beneficial for our upcoming generation. We will plant the seed and out descenders will enjoy the fruit.
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  • reliance on
  • regulate
  • traffic congestion
  • pollution
  • public health
  • sustainable development
  • alternative forms of transport
  • car ownership
  • balancing benefits and drawbacks
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