Some people think that keeping pets is good for children while others think it is dangerous and unhealthy.Which opinion do you agree with?Discuss both options and give example.

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present era, people are opting to adopt a pet whether they have children or not.

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, some people have a vehement believe that it is having the drastic effects on the little kids. I, personally, believe that the beneficial effects overpower the detrimental ones.

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, children who are growing up with the pet learn how to share. Because the tame animals are like the children that, kids and pets both be grown up like the agemate siblings. The youngest member of the family has to share his toys, his food, even his bed with his animal sister or brother.

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, the little man can get used to

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everything he has. Hereby, he becomes more friendly according to the human who is in the same age. Especially, the child can be more successful in his relationship in his whole life. Because he will be raised up with empathy and the sense of sharing.

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, the parents who have pets are able to engrain in the

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nimal to their daughters and sons. An individual who grew up with the

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nimal is taught how to

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humanity, nature, other animals and so on. The society will get better with the people who grew up with the

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human who has

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nimal is more responsive to animal rights and, in any case about the violence against the animals,

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person can speak up immediately. To contrast with the given ideas, the pets have

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otential to attack

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children suddenly which is an enormous danger for the families. If the parents can not protect their kids, they carry lasting damage to their bodies.

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, the fur is another issue. In the case of the lacking of cleanliness, the babies might swallow them so, their lungs suffer damage. Sometimes, the pets might be a threat for children and their health unless the parents do not preserve them. To conclude, living with a creature has many merits

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as positive character development yet, it contains some demerits against the human body.

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, the merits outstrip the demerits and, I side with the

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