Nowadays animal experiments are widely used to develop new medicines and to test the safety of other products. Some people argue that these experiments should be banned because it is morally wrong to cause animals to suffer, while others are in favor of them because of their benefits to humanity. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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In the modern era, A valuable discussion going on the society, where some people demand to stop killing wild animals for testing drugs others have the opposite view. In

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on the mouses and monkeys and in some religions in India these animals have huge respect.

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, People give respect to some species as a god.

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pain or fear. So, Using wildlife for providing benefits to human life's totally unjustified. The recent studies show that each year around thousand of rats has been used for medicines purpose know these species is in the danger of losing.

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, It is an irrefutable fact that medicines

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on animals have huge benefits on human life because It saves citizens from many unwanted side effects.

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, Covid-19 vaccine directly tested on humans which kill some people all around the globe. So, scientists have no better opposition

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new drugs.

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, Animals body have the ability to absorb effects of new medicine as compared to human beings because the university of Toronto did great research and found that monkeys have some type to unique power to gain the high doses of the new chemical in their body. Which helps doctor or researcher to create new drugs. To conclude, I would like to state that there are both views of an above-said question.

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I am in the favour of benefits to humanity from animals experiments because

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new drugs yet.

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