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In many places, new homes are needed, but the only space available for building them is in the countryside. Some people believe it is more important to protect the countryside and not build new homes there. What is your opinion about this

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Congestion is rapidly burgeoning in the cities, to solve
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estruction of the beauty of the countrysides and homes should not be built there.
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equirement of land will be fulfilled, I believe the natural attractions of
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ountryside will be lost.  On the one side,
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opulation is increasing with an enormous rate who require houses to live. Land in cities is limited which cannot satisfy the demand of people.
This
 demand can be fulfilled by building homes in places away from cities.
For instance
, in Delhi, there is hardly any space left for construction;
however
, people are now shifting to nearby areas. If these new areas are not developed, it will be difficult for people to survive and live peacefully.
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, construction in the village areas become necessary.
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bundance of natural beauty and mesmerising scenic views. Construction of new buildings will inversely effect
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Urbanization
  • Ecological benefits
  • Biodiversity conservation
  • Carbon sequestration
  • Sustainable development
  • Eco-friendly building materials
  • Green architecture
  • Government policies
  • Urban sprawl
  • Infrastructure
  • Smart planning
  • Agricultural lands
  • Rural areas
  • Population growth
  • Environmental sensitivity
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