People born today can expect to live longer than people in previous generations. What are some of the positive and negative implications of this phenomenon? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Life expectancy has seen a huge improvement over the
last
few decades, the
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average
age of a person nowadays is much higher than
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revious generation.
This
clearly shows that people are giving more attention to their
health
, which is a good thing,
however
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this
will
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ncrease
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increase
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ociety which indirectly impacts everything. People today are more aware and
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than
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they used to be. From the
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we have seen a rise in
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umber of diseases, which has shifted the focus of people towards a healthy lifestyle. People are more aware than before, in case they have any problem they google that problem before visiting the doctor. They are spending
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lot
of money on
health
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oom right now.
For instance
, every other person has a gym membership nowadays and every locality has dozens of fitness centres.
On the other hand
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ncreased
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increased
population. With people moving towards a healthier lifestyle , the death rate will slow down which will lead to higher population. And we all know that higher population is not good for us. Already there are many countries where people are dying because of hunger. Apart from hunger,
this
will give rise to poverty as well. In my opinion along with
health
,everyone should
also
focus on birth control, as we have limited resources and the demand is unlimited. It is a good thing that we are
health
-focused but
also
needs to make people aware of the problems which we are facing today to create a better future for generations.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • life expectancy
  • seasoned workforce
  • health advancements
  • chronic conditions
  • social welfare systems
  • pension plans
  • policy adjustments
  • aging population
  • cultural experiences
  • loneliness
  • mental health
  • geriatric care
  • consumption of resources
  • environmental stresses
  • climate change
  • resource depletion
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