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Some people think that the best way to learn about business is to study a course at college or university. Others believe that there are other better ways to learn about business. Discuss both views and give your opinion

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Significance of tertiary education to gain knowledge about
business
 has often been argued where some individuals favour the idea, and a few hold the notion that there are numerous other ways to learn it.
This
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how degree programs can enhance a person's acquisition of knowledge and skills to be a successful person along with the significance of gaining
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irst-hand
experience
 in the field after school hours. Universities and colleges offer students with learning experiences in the hands of experienced and skilled staff. Most of them hold
an
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apt qualification and skills to aware students with current
business
 scenarios and strategies.
Moreover
, students get a chance to
experience
 multiple
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 to the learning materials when they avail on-site placements in real
business
 firms.
This
 provides them with a chance to acquire work ethics, craft skills and enough information to be a future successful businessman.
Secondly
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renowned companies prefer to recruit new employees who possess a higher degree in
business
 qualification from a reputed university.
For instance
, most of the employees from TATA motors are the graduates from the BHEL university
that is
 known for delivering
high quality
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 courses based on
business
 units.
On the contrary
, there are a few opponents who consider that there are several ways to be prepared to become an entrepreneur
such
 as opting to work under someone after school hours.
Such
 ventures can prepare a person for better
business
 opportunities by gaining real life-based
experience
, knowledge and craft skills beforehand.
Additionally
, one can gain enough public relationships before even entering into the profession that
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 essential to bloom in
business
 areas. Examples of
such
 successful businesspersons are numerous like Ratan TATA, Steve job and many more, who started earlier and did not have any higher qualification. Having
this
 understanding , I
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however
 believe that it is necessary to have both,
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good tertiary education and skills and a beforehand
experience
 to succeed in
business
 workforce areas as all these are indispensable assets of one's craft that he can utilise to become successful in future
business
 ventures. To recapitulate, it is inferred from the above discussion that both a higher degree and an
experience
that is
 gained before entering into the
business
 can enhance a persons’ chances to be a productive and
hence
 a successful businessman.
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