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Some people think the increasing business and cultural contact between countries bring many positive effects. Others say it causes the loss of national identities. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

#people #business #contact #countries #effects #loss #identities
Nowadays,
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globalization has
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 a heated issue. Whether the business and cultural contact plays a role between
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elationships of countries. Some people think that the local citizen
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 from
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ulticultural society.But the opponents believe it can bring the lack of
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 identities. the advantage of the business contectcan
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creates
create
 more
employerments
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employment
employments
 to local people. Because of, the flux of the foreign companies,
thus
 these companies are required more job
maket
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market
 to meet the companies needs.
In addition
, it can
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 people’s living standard.
This
 is because
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there
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 foreign companies bring not only funds but
also
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advance
advice
advanced
 technologies.
For example
, advance technologies can raise the rate of products, which means that people can spend lesser money on commodities.
Beside
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, the cultural
contect
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context
contact
content
 increases the interdependence, connectivity and integration on.
Such
 as
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tourism, people respecting and visiting other cultures with an open mind by
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ravel of foreign history.
On the other hand
, opponents think that we are facing a problem of losing our own cultural identity because cultures from other countries are flooding into our nation. Many societies are filled with other countries cultures. Including
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, more and more people dress fashionable costume or suit in daily life and working time rather than
tradition
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 clothing. As
such
this
 leads to us losing of
nation
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 identities in costume. In conclusion,
although
 the globalization
make
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 contributions to our daily life, it is harmful to our preservation
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traditionable
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traditional
 culture. I think that the government should enact a series of ways to reach the
banlance
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balance
 between globalization and tradition cultures.
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