Some people think the increasing business and cultural contact between countries bring many positive effects. Others say it causes the loss of national identities. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

Nowadays,

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globalization has

became

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a heated issue. Whether the business and cultural contact plays a role between

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elationships of countries. Some people think that the local citizen

benefit

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from

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ulticultural society.But the opponents believe it can bring the lack of

nation

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identities. the advantage of the business contectcan

creats

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creates

create

more

employerments

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employment

employments

to local people. Because of, the flux of the foreign companies,

thus

these companies are required more job

maket

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market

to meet the companies needs.

In addition

, it can

improves

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people’s living standard.

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is because

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there

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foreign companies bring not only funds but

also

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advance

advice

advanced

technologies.

For example

, advance technologies can raise the rate of products, which means that people can spend lesser money on commodities.

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, the cultural

contect

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context

contact

content

increases the interdependence, connectivity and integration on.

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as

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tourism, people respecting and visiting other cultures with an open mind by

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ravel of foreign history.

On the other hand

, opponents think that we are facing a problem of losing our own cultural identity because cultures from other countries are flooding into our nation. Many societies are filled with other countries cultures. Including

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, more and more people dress fashionable costume or suit in daily life and working time rather than

tradition

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clothing. As

such

this

leads to us losing of

nation

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identities in costume. In conclusion,

although

the globalization

make

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contributions to our daily life, it is harmful to our preservation

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traditionable

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traditional

culture. I think that the government should enact a series of ways to reach the

banlance

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balance

between globalization and tradition cultures.