companies should provide sports and social facilities for local communities.To what extent do you agree?

Some argue, that it is the responsibility of the companies to facilitate their local communities with sports and social services.
This
essay disagrees with
this
point of view, it is not the job of an organisation to provide facilities to the community.I think, it's on the government, to look after
this
issue, that if their locals need adequate facilities like outdoor playing and bonding activities.Companies should only be responsible for providing these facilities to their own workers.
To begin
with, different companies all over the world bestow their staff with varying services, like getting them memberships for their exclusive sports complexes and clubs where people can socialise and meet other locals.Some say, that these companies should
also
allow inhabitants from the local communities to have access to these facilities.
However
, I think, that it's the job of the government to supply their people with services like
this
.It's the responsibility of the regime
first
to take care of their people,
then
come the private organisations.
For instance
, let's say that there is no adequate sports club and a pub in a town for the people to play and socialise, inhabitants there will always demand the government
first
to provide them with those facilities because we pay taxes to the state, not the businesses.
Secondly
, I think, companies should only be concerned about their workers.They don'
t
have to take the burden of
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ntire society upon their shoulders, as it won'
t
be good for the economy of that organisation.Staff work for their company and give them services in return for the facilities their company provides them with.So, it's a give and
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situation, where both benefit from each other.So it should only be the staff that should be enjoying these facilities, not the entire community.
For example
, Apple provides exclusive discounts and access to social gatherings and yearly sports activities for their staff, but it's not their job to bestow the entire society with these services as they don'
t
work for them To conclude, I would say, that I don'
t
think it's on a specific organisation to build their locals things like sports organisations or restaurants so that they can enjoy an active lifestyle and socialise
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because its the responsibility of the state
first
.Companies should only provide these facilities to people who work under them because at least they are giving them something back and it won'
t
turn out detrimental for the economy of the company in the long run
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