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In some countries the elderly are highly valued and respected, while in others youth is more highly valued. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

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In some places, the elderly and
youth
 have different treatment. There are some countries that the elderly tend to be more respected, while others tend to valorize more
youth
. In my opinion, both have equal importance considering what elderly people have done and what
youth
 people will do. It is common in certain countries to recognize the elderly as more valuable.
This
 is because they think we have a lot to learn from older people since they have faced all kind of situations and they can teach
youth
 the best way.
Additionally
, they believe the society which we belong to was constructed by ancient people.
In other words
, what we are and do is due to what they did in the past and
this
 is the reason that they should be more respected. Alternatively, in some regions
youth
 receives more attention and respect. The reasons are that they believe
youth
 is the future and they will be the basis of a strong society. To illustrate, young people will be leaders of tomorrow and they will have an important role in our lives. In my opinion, both elderly and
youth
 should be treated equally.
Although
 the elderly is the final phase of our lives, they have done a lot to us and they deserve to spend the rest of their life as respected as possible. At the same time, we have to respect and valorize young people in the same way because they will be the future of the world. To sum up,
although
 some countries treat differently elderly and
youth
, I believe they should be considered both important because each one has an important role in society.
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