Some people state the schools should have a social responsibility to encourage children not to eat junk food. Others believe that parents should take responsibility for their children’s eating habits. Discuss both views and state your opinion.

Some people argue that school should take

responsibility

to let schoolchildren not to eat fast

food

while others disagree with

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that parents should have

responsibility

for their children’s eating habits.

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essay will examine both sides of the arguments and draw a conclusion that parents should have

responsibility

for their children’s healthy eating habit. Some may argue that educational institutions should have a

responsibility

because every child acquires important knowledge about eating habits. play a part in children’s

food

education, there are some benefits. One of them is that teachers who have knowledge about nutrition can instruct children about

food

education.

As a result

, pupils could obtain accurate information which is helpful for their healthy diet. Another merit is equality. When schools take

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children’s eating

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, all schoolchildren would have an opportunity to learn

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chool can set the lecture about

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armful effects of fast

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one of the topics.

However

, I believe that parents should have

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esponsibility

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their children’s eating habits

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because there are more positive aspects.

Firstly

, parents can look after their children for a long period

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of changing the main teacher every year. Generally, parents know about their kids eating preference because they live together.

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to that, parents prepare their children’s meal

everyday

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.

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ealthy diet since they are young, they could have high awareness

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their diet and nutrition. In conclusion, while it is true that schools have some benefits about teaching eating habits on children, in my opinion, parents should play an important role in their kids because parents can educate children for a long-term perspective.