With access to the internet and social media websites, many children are exposed to a number of dangerous situations. Adults should thus limit access to the internet for their children. Do you agree or disagree?

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agree that the easy
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of internet these days have made our lives easy but has
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created various
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situations for us and our children
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, setting a time limit is a great idea.
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, discussing how identity frauds can be easily
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followed by how we fall for traps like
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click baits
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. Almost everyone especially children access various social media
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. They share their photos online, their locations and befriend strangers as well. These strangers can download our photos and impersonate to be us to ask favours from our friends.
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there are so many fake accounts making it difficult for us to trust people we meet online. Everyone who has an email account must have
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emails informing us that we have won a lottery or an exclusive holiday. Children being the ones with gullible minds can be tempted to
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emails. With just one click on the link in the email, the sender can access all our personal information, including our bank details. There is one
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exposing our bank details. In conclusion, letting our children use the internet is not bad but parents can limit their screen time and can
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make use of the parental control features to block certain sites, making it a safer experience.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • dangerous situations
  • limit access to the internet
  • inappropriate content
  • online predators
  • physical and mental health
  • monitoring and guiding
  • online safety
  • school curriculum
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