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You recently moved to a new house and you want to invite an old friend to stay with you. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, -Invite him to stay and suggest a date -briefly describe the new house and garden -say why you like your new house.

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Dear
sneha
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Sneha
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, How're you doing? It's a long time since we caught up
each
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 other. I'm writing
this
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 letter to invite you to my new place where
I've
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I
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 moved
last
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 month. I know you'll be very excited to hear it. I
was
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 waiting for
this
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 moment for so long, and can't wait to show you my new house. Next week, I am free from my work, so I think it will be a great opportunity to meet and spend time with each other. My holidays will
be start
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 from 23rd January until 31st January.
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,
25th
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the 25th
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 is a suitable date for you to book your ticket so that I've one day in advance to prepare. My new house is very spacious, and situated in the outskirts of the city away from great hustle and bustle. Not only
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, your excitement will be more when you will see my new place'garden which is full of greenery,
alots
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a lot
 of vegetables and fruits have
grown
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 by my mother. You'll enjoy homemade vegetables free from insecticides and
pestcides
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pesticides
. I am very satisfied with my new house because of the proximity of all basic amenities
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 as
,
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medical
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a medical
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 store, private education centre, and
good
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a good
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 transportation system within a distance. The area is not only free from noise and air pollution but
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 clean air and
silience
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silence
 will keep your mind fresh and
healthy
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your healthy
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 body. I look forward to
see
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 you soon. Please book your ticket now to ensure your journey. Regards, Amanjot Kaur.

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coherence cohesion
Consider breaking down long paragraphs into distinct ideas for better readability.
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Double-check verb tenses and singular/plural forms in your sentence to ensure grammatical accuracy.
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The letter clearly invites the friend and provides a specific date for the visit.
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The overall tone of the letter is friendly and suitable for a personal letter to a friend.
coherence cohesion
There is a logical flow of ideas, making it easy for the reader to follow.
coherence cohesion
The use of greeting and closing adds a personal touch to the letter.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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