Global warming is one of the biggest threat to our environment. What cause global warming? What solutions are there to solve this problem.

Environmental issues are rapidly burgeoning worldwide. Global warming is the biggest issue
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igh emersion of carbon dioxide in the air. Using CNG and
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friendly products can help in alleviating the situation. On the one side,
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arge amount of fuels are used in automobiles which
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elease of gases in the air. These gases are devastating and have bad effects. These gases evolve in the
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ncrease in global temperature.
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igh amount of
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • global warming
  • environmental degradation
  • climate change
  • greenhouse effect
  • carbon dioxide
  • methane
  • emissions
  • fossil fuels
  • deforestation
  • industrialization
  • livestock farming
  • population growth
  • waste management
  • volcanic eruptions
  • polar ice caps
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