Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

To improve the overall

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of the public, a section of the society considers physical activity

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of sports very vital.

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, a few argue that

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would have no significant effect on the well-being of the community and

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other measures need to be explored. In my opinion, other factors need to be considered in order to improve public

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. On one hand, sports

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as running, football, volleyball, netball, swimming, to mention but a few, have been linked to the eradication of numerous

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problems like high cholesterol, hypertension and obesity. Because of

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observation, physical education has been included in the syllabus of all primary schools in Uganda. I believe that participating in sports has contributed to

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among participants. Still, physical exercises alone can not be the major attribute to a

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person.

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, I suggest that

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comes from a collective effort concerning

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changes, eating habits and physical exercise.

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, a number of medical practitioners have recommended a combination of the above three so that the

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of their patients is improved. In fact

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has always been related to what people eat;

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has been shown in Netflix documentaries like 'Heal' that relate eating habits to general

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. Another well-known scientist ,Hippocrates, suggested that 'let food be thy medicine'.

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clearly indicates that sports

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likely not the major key to public

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. To conclude, it is my perspective that physical exercise in form of sports is beneficial for the

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of the community.

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, the

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of the public depends on other numerous factors which need to be researched and considered.