People can eat a wide variety of food that can be grown in other areas. As a result, people eat more food produced in other regions than local food. Do you think the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages?
Human beings and all other creatures' hearts beat because they consume something that generates energy and power.
People
have access to different types of things to eat from other places. Use synonyms
Therefore
they significantly eat more products from other lands than domestic Linking Words
ones
. Use synonyms
This
essay is going to reveal how Linking Words
this
action is not privileged but rather brings about abnormalities.
There are some Linking Words
people
who are not willing to use native Use synonyms
foods
and rather choose the non-native Use synonyms
ones
. Use synonyms
For instance
, the Turkish Kebab is being consumed by many Iranian Linking Words
people
and these groups believe it is more tasteful than local Kebab. Use synonyms
In addition
, a diverse range of fruits being eaten in most areas does not even belong to those countries. There are advantages regarding Linking Words
this
issue on the one hand and some disadvantages Linking Words
on the other hand
. When local Linking Words
people
are not interested in their original Use synonyms
food
the producers will be disappointed in producing them Use synonyms
due to
lack of income and rate of selling and rather will make non-native Linking Words
food
in the locality which is not introducing them well.
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Besides
, some traditional Linking Words
foods
which are being cooked in order to preserve the ancient traditions will be exacerbated and eliminated gradually just because there is no demand for them and one day they will see they have completely changed their tastes. What is beneficial is that miscellaneous Use synonyms
foods
are available everywhere and everyone including the tourists can choose their favourites. Use synonyms
Moreover
, it has to be approved that some Linking Words
foods
are more delicious than others and will be accessible to the whole community. By way of illustration, fast Use synonyms
food
is a Western Use synonyms
food
which is presented all over the world by different names Use synonyms
such
as KFC, McDonald and so on.
In conclusion, even though there are some advantages to consuming non-local Linking Words
foods
, using the original Use synonyms
ones
by the local Use synonyms
people
will maintain culture and tradition Use synonyms
as well as
improve their qualities by changing Linking Words
people
's tastes over time. Use synonyms
Therefore
using native Linking Words
foods
somehow outweighs utilizing non-native Use synonyms
ones
.Use synonyms
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