Some schools have restricted the use of mobile phones. Do you think it is a positive development or a negative one?

Mobile phones can increase the knowledge and productivity of students. Some people opine that these are distracting children;
however
, it should be banned in
school
.
Although
there are few repercussions, I believe limiting the usage of phones in
school
is a good decision.
Firstly
, mobile phones distract students. The voice of ringing can disturb the students while they are attending the class. Some lessons are vital to listen
.
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If a sound buzz, the learnings may disturb.
For instance
, if there is no restriction, students will text each other in class.
This
will lead to a loss in studies. The precious time of students will be lost. Teachers' efforts are
also
wasted as they will be busy with their phones.
Therefore
, limiting the usage of electronic gadgets in
school
is beneficial as students will be focused and determined in the classes.
Secondly
, children minds are vulnerable, they effect by small incidents. If there are no restrictions, they will use social media frequently. Numerous incidents happen in
school
. Student can record these accidents in their phones by using cameras. They can
further
pass these recordings on social media.
For instance
, a recent survey state that most of the students in
school
share vulgar texts and videos to each other. Their age is delicate;
however
, these content affect them detrimentally. Limited access to phones will eradicate these issues and alleviate the situation. In conclusion , mobile phones can cause lack of concentration and notorious incidents in
school
. In my perspective with limited usage, focus on studies increase and it is a positive development.
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