Your workplace does not have a parking area for cars, and it is causing some problems. Write a letter to your manager and include the following: – Describe the problems it has caused. – Explain what benefits a parking area would bring to the company. – Suggest a solution.

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Dear Mr. Watson, I am writing
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letter to draw your attention to the lack of parking spaces near our restaurant in the Hall Road branch. As you know,
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area is one of the busiest parts of the city, so it is extremely difficult to find a suitable parking area for cars. Most of our dinners come to the restaurant by car and waste a lot of time
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a spot. Unfortunately, we have received an array of complaints recently. If the shop had a parking lot, we would develop our business far better. A convenient and free parking spot can motivate potential customers to choose our place;
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, our profit will increase considerably. Recently, I have seen an advertisement in the local newsletter that a five-hectare plot across the street is available for rent. I suppose it would be beneficial if you could consider renting
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land and shifting it to a private parking area. Thanks for your cooperation and I look forward to hearing from you. Yours sincerely Harry Koln

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Ensure that the introduction clearly outlines the purpose of the letter.
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Consider including more specific examples of complaints to strengthen the description of the problems.
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The letter is polite and maintains a professional tone throughout.
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The suggestion and rationale for a parking area are clearly articulated, showing a good understanding of the issue at hand.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • inconveniences
  • designated
  • punctuality
  • productivity
  • enhanced
  • potential
  • demonstrates
  • acquiring
  • vacant
  • arranging
  • agreement
  • implementing
  • shuttle service
  • encouraging
  • carpooling
  • incentives
  • subsidies
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