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Some people think that nowadays children have too much freedom. Do you agree or disagree?

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Some people adhere to the view that children these days are granted 
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excessive
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. I completely agree with
this
 notion, because I believe that children with overmuch independence tend to be abusive and disrespectful. On the contrary, with less 
freedom
, a disciplined and well-guided individual can be developed.
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ast amount of 
freedom
 can nourish a child's self-sufficiency, confidence and social skills. They feel that through autonomy, he can have the chance to make his own decision and power during the course of his life. 
Moreover
, they assume he can 
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profound self-determination can increase life risks and the possibility of a child/teen running against the law. 
Moreover
, if a teenager exercised more 
freedom
, he would be more prone to stranger abductions, drownings and bullying. 
Additionally
, he might end up being spoiled and obnoxious. As a result, a great deal of discipline and adjustment would be necessary once he entered school. It is where he would be confronted with the reality that he cannot possess everything
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 his own way. Whence, his behaviour should be restrained to consider others, as well. In my experience, my brother, having been used to enjoy enormous autonomy during his childhood, ended up breaking rules in school. 
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 entering an academic institution which practices rigid guidelines, he ultimately transformed into a well-mannered and disciplined person. In conclusion, I believe that extreme
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ormative years of a child is preposterous. 
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absolute
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