Countries around the world will be facing significant challenges relating not only to the environment, but population and education as well. What problems will your country face in the next ten years? How can these problems be overcome?

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advanced era, problems

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as climate change, overpopulation and lack of education infrastructure are on rising at the global scale. Every

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, great education has become a necessity in

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modern period. The way of teaching is still the same as it was half a century ago. Population increasing at an enormous rate is leading to problems like mass production and pollution. The major concern for my

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is brain drain as there is no proper infrastructure for anything.

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, the basic computer courses focus only on textual knowledge, and it takes years to apply that practical knowledge.

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in the world as most of its generation is still young.

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, problems like these should be thought critically. These issues could be solved in various ways. It will start with political acknowledgement and the leaders should be educated to make these decisions. If uneducated people will make decisions for the educated population how can someone scope for a great future

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Farmers in India to exemplify, are on a strike due to horrific decisions made by the

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, the ministry can start programs to control the population as in some parts of India a family has more than ten kids. Better incentives should be offered to educated people so that they will stay in their

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stringent actions are required to solve these problems. To conclude, it is the duty of people to choose educated leaders to make better decisions for their

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and it is the responsibility of the

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to do its best for its taxpayers. These problems require modern solutions and co-operation of people as well as the

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Topic Vocabulary:

Sustainability
Ecosystem
Renewable resources
Urbanization
Demographics
Healthcare system
Pension crisis
Curriculum development
Digital literacy
E-learning platforms
Lifelong learning
Public policy
Biodiversity conservation
Green technology
Population density
Generational equity
Economic disparity

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Countries around the world will be facing significant challenges relating not only to the environment, but population and education as well. What problems will your country face in the next ten years? How can these problems be overcome?

Fully explain your ideas

In some countries university students live at home with their family while they study, whereas in other countries students attend university in another city. Do you think the benefits of living away from home during university outweigh the disadvantages?

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There is a discussion whether young individuals should be taught about morality by their teachers or teachers’ responsibility should just simply be related to academic knowledge. In this essay, I will prove that it is necessary to emphasize both views.

What's the right age for parents to get their kids a cell phone? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.