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in the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. to what extent do you agree or disagree with this statements.

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There is an expectation that on the following year , that all people are going to read all they like through online network , without paying to buy newspapers or books.
This
 idea is completely flowed owing to the
respection
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respective
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copy rights
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 by some people and the benefits of reliable sources offered by
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ewspaper,
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of
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 the facility of carrying books everywhere. On one hand, many people saw reading online without paying is considered as
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theft and breaking of
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 rules, as they have to spend money in turn of obtaining
this
 service like others. While the writers of books could not earn from their books, they would stop writing as consequence and become unmotivated .
Besides
this
 point people saw breaking rules, any rules would make them
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ad role model to their children. Another two reasons for buying printed resources, the
first
 is the ease of reading them at any place no matter the Internet is available or not, and
this
 is very important for those who find extreme entertainment in reading,
for example
, since I was in Alexandria
last
 year, I found many adults read while relaxing on the beach. The
second
, printed newspapers
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for instance, more reliable rather than getting them online from
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unknown
 sources, which sometimes have intended to hide the truth to direct readers to their own believes. In conclusion,
although
 reading through online networks have increased in the modern life and it is expected to increase more in the future , it could not replace printed books and newspapers due to their responsibility about what they write and their ease of use together with
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respections
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respects
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road spectrum of readers.
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