Many working people get little or no exercise either during the working day or in their free time, and have health problems as a result. Why do many people working not get enough exercise? What can be done about this problem?
A great part of the people who are in their working ages nowadays do not get enough they prefer to do more relaxing activities. To solve these problems the employers and the government have to act by providing the resources for the people to
exercise
either during the week or in their leisure time, Use synonyms
consequently
, they have been facing health issues. Linking Words
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essay discusses some of the causes of that and proposes solutions for Linking Words
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urgent matter.
One of the causes Linking Words
for
people being less fit these days is because of the long hours of work they have to perform every week. Verify preposition usage
of
As a result
, when they are not working on their jobs they are too tired to workout. Another problem is that people have been prioritising activities like watching TV and playing videogames over more active activities like going to the gym or practising some sport because they feel it is more relaxing. Linking Words
For example
, my mom works fifty hours per week, when she Linking Words
finally
gets the time to Linking Words
exercise
, she is too tired and prefers to watch a movie on the couch.
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However
, there are solutions to Linking Words
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problem. Linking Words
Firstly
, employers could incentive the practice of Linking Words
exercise
by providing a gym membership for their employees, so they do not have the excuse that they do not have enough money to do it. Use synonyms
Secondly
, the government should invest in an advertisement campaign about the risks of lack of Linking Words
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exercise
like heart disease and depression because by having Change the noun form
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this
kind of knowledge people will probably start exercising.
In conclusion, the main reasons for Linking Words
the
working people not being very active nowadays are that they have to work too much and in their leisure timeRemove the article
apply
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,
exercise
regularly and inform them about the risks of not doing it.Use synonyms
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