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some people think that minimum age should be increased for driving motercars. To what extent you agree or disagree

#people #age #motercars
There is no denying the fact that nowadays these days, traffic congestion has been increased to a large extent which leads to
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ajor accident. Some people argue that there should be
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inimum legal age for drivers for
safety
 purposes. On the whole, I disagree with
this
 statement
however
, it can
also
 be one of the best
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 to avoid accidents.
To begin
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overnment should encourage people to use traffic lights. It has been noticed that in
this
 fast peace era, people often cross the
road
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urry even if the lights are red. People always want to go
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 their destinations in
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ew minutes which is impossible because of
road
 jams.
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 should make a rule that people have to pay
penailty
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penalty
 if they break
road
 rules.
As a result
, perhaps, people would start to follow all traffic rules and regulations which will definitely make
road
 save for drivers.
In addition
 to
this
, people should learn driving from professionals so that they can get information about the whole important parameters of driving which
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 a vital role when people drive . In
this
 way, people can drive motors safely when they have enough knowledge of driving.
Furthermore
, people should use public transports if they really want to reduce the number of accidents. In 2019, it has been studied through a survey that in India, 85 %
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people meet with
road
 accidents because of
road
 jams. When people will use public vehicles, it will affect directly on
road
safety
.
On the other hand
, there should
also
 be
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inimum legal age of riding motorbikes. It seems that if immature people are not much concerned about
road
safety
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their precious life, they people will get
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riving license after their teenage, it can
also
 lead to drivers
safety
. In conclusion, to enhance
road
safety
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overnment should make some effective rules along with certain age of taking driving license.
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