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Some people think that paying tax is their only duty, while others believe that we have more responsibilities towards our society. Discuss both the sides and give your opinion

#people #tax #duty #responsibilities #society
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Public give
tax
 to assist
g
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overnment to continue their
country
 well.
However
, some individuals consider people
also
 do more duties for
the
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apply
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social purposes. There are advantages and disadvantages for both of the arguments.
To begin
 with,
a
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folk have to pay the government owed. The state is very big. The task is
also
 vast. A minister has a lot of responsibility to forward his
country
 in a smooth way. Public taxes help
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resident very much to funding in the various sections. If a person does not provide government-paid properly the system of the entire case will be collapsed. Paying
tax
 properly plays a vital role in the
country
.
For instance
, if a person is
b
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usinessman, it is his sole duty for him to give the
tax
 as early as possible. In case of salaried folks
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the same method will be adopted.
On the contrary
, the state is vast. It is not possible to take care of all facts for a government to continue his
country
. If a person
take
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 steps to do social works it helps the whole nation to spot their states in a compatible stage. Folks doing work socially can be popular to his nation. He can get help to his people when he would be in danger.
For example
, after paying
tax
 if a folk wish that he can contribute money in religious institutions it would be very helpful for the disaster people. Eventually, think of cleaning the road may keep balance the natural environment. In conclusion,
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ublic must pay
tax
 to keep their countries in a forwarding mode.
However
, some individuals think social work is necessary to make the state in a good position.
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    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • fiscal responsibilities
  • state's revenues
  • societal structures
  • moral and societal duties
  • community service
  • environmental sustainability
  • democratic processes
  • efficiency
  • utilizing tax revenues
  • social issues
  • redundant
  • active citizenship
  • civic engagement
  • personal and collective efforts
  • societal enhancement
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