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new technologies have changed the way fro children to spend their free time do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages

#technologies #children #time
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technologies
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 changing children's free time. Some
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hild but
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 think new technologies have
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benefits
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, the advanced technologies are
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agreeing
 now due to media report lots of negative news
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 as a child does not make any relationships because drop into the computer and mobile phone but
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teachnologies
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technologies
 caused
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 reason is children using it not very well
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because
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they
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 can not control themselves. In my opinion, technologies are good for children and it is destined to play
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 important role in children's life. The technologies are not just game, children can get
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knowledge
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deeper insight
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orld through it. We are in a fast-
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changing century
 if children fo not know how to manipulate technologies
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ew system of computer and mobile phone even virtual technologies they will be kept from society. Technologies are friends to children,
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 families. When they want to play with technologies they have to focus on them and consider the methods of technologies' using that will lead children
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. Everything borns for a reason. Children spent more time in advanced technologies is normal now they need to changing and catch up
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the world rather than let the world
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 with them. In conclusion, people have to teach children how to make a good relationship with advanced technologies rather than criticize it.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Digital literacy
  • Cyberbullying
  • Sedentary lifestyle
  • Inappropriate content
  • Self-learning
  • Screen time
  • Social inequality
  • Enhanced communication
  • Creative expression
  • Educational resources
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