To succeed in business, one need to know math. To what extend do you agree or disagree?
People believe that math is a crucial factor to become a successful entrepreneur. I think other skills
Although
we can not deny an important role of mathematical skill
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First
of all, I recognize the reasons why some people think math is significantly important to the one who invole
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involve
business
, one of which is that business
is about exchanging and trading in the market
which needs mathematical skill
for calculation. For instance
, this
skill
would support the boss to check and examine market
analysis or calculate revenue, cost. Therefore
, without calculating skill
the entrepreneur might be cheated by their secretary, employees or even lose their money in daily business
.
However
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,
such
as leadership and business
sense should be carefully taken into account. Firstly
, the business man
needs leadership Correct your spelling
businessman
skill
to organize, operate the company and make their employees listened to their command. With this
ability, the boss could control and push the
productivity, encourage their employees to contribute more for the Remove the article
apply
business
project. By contrast
, if the entrepreneur was not required this
vital skill
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, workers might not Change to the active voice
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listened
to them and even worst destroy the company. Change the verb form
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Secondly
, business
sense is what the leader need
to identify the Change the verb form
needs
market
, understand people’s need and clearly see the tendency of m
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Otherwise
, they would loss
their potential contract and customers. So the leader with a Replace the word
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business
mind would thrvie
and achieve more accomplishments.
In conclusion, I hold the belief that to succeed in Correct your spelling
thrive
business
, one not only need to learn about math but they have to learn other skills too.Submitted by hnam7458 on
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