There are many different types of music in the world today. Why do we need music? Is the traditional music of a country more important than the International music that is heard everywhere nowadays?

Since time immemorial
music
has been an integral part of our lives and without
music
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the
world
would be a dull, drab, dry and colourless place.
Music
touches our lives in many different ways. I believe that both local
country
music
specific to a region and the
music
available all over the
world
can be beneficial for
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society. In the ensuing paragraphs, I will
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explicate my viewpoints with relevant examples to support my notion.
Music
has a huge impact on us as it often conveys important messages in a melodious manner. Songs worldwide have beautiful lyrics which touch human souls by evoking different feelings
such
as love, happiness, melancholy and peace. Often a song covers social issues
such
as abuse, violence, torture, female foeticide etc. Devotional songs dedicated to God are
also
a form of prayer that
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widely played in temples, mosques and church choirs.
On the other hand
, patriotic songs of countries express the nations core beliefs and philosophies.
For example
, India's national anthem relays
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mportant message of..national integrity, unity and peace. As a consequence,
this
song evokes immense feelings of patriotism for the
country
.
Moreover
,
music
is a form of therapy. People from all walks of life after a hectic workday listen to their favourite songs to release stress. Most importantly,
music
has the power to heal patients from their illnesses as it is believed that the musical notes in a song create positive vibrations which help in coping with the illness. I am of the opinion that the traditional
country
music
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, as well as the world music each has its own charm and both,
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world
music
each has its own charm and both are equally significant. Local
country
music
of a region i.e. folk
music
represents the social and cultural ethos of a nation, its indigenous tradition and can be a matter of extreme pride for a community.
For example
, in India
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every state has its indigenous folk tradition
such
as be it
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in Gujarat, bhangra in Punjab or Baul in West Bengal, Lavani in Maharashtra.
Therefore
, every regional
music
is important which indeed adds more colours and variety to the
world
.
On the other hand
, the universally played International
music
plays a crucial role in unifying people from various corners of the globe.
This
is because, in the current era of globalization, people are crossing geographical barriers for work or studies and in a way they can instantly connect with each other based on common songs.
Moreover
, many countries are inspired and influenced by international
music
to create their own
music
.
Consequently
, international
music
can aid in the harmonization and progress of an individual and society. In conclusion, life is unimaginable without
music
as
music
is the universal language that
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does not
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discriminate
people of different caste, creed, gender and religion. It is important that we listen to propagate international
music
as well as retain indigenous
music
of a culture.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • emotional release
  • cultural significance
  • globalization
  • cultural exchange
  • technology
  • preservation
  • cultural heritage
  • social cohesion
  • expression
  • consumption
  • production
  • traditional music
  • international music
  • diversity
  • identity
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