There are many different types of music in the world today. Why do we need music? Is the traditional music of a country more important than the International music that is heard everywhere nowadays?

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Since time immemorial
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has been an integral part of our lives and without
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the
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would be a dull, drab, dry and colourless place.
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touches our lives in many different ways. I believe that both local
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music
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specific to a region and the
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available all over the
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can be beneficial for
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has a huge impact on us as it often conveys important messages in a melodious manner. Songs worldwide have beautiful lyrics which touch human souls by evoking different feelings
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as love, happiness, melancholy and peace. Often a song covers social issues
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as abuse, violence, torture, female foeticide etc. Devotional songs dedicated to God are
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a form of prayer that
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widely played in temples, mosques and church choirs.
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, patriotic songs of countries express the nations core beliefs and philosophies.
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, India's national anthem relays
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mportant message of..national integrity, unity and peace. As a consequence,
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song evokes immense feelings of patriotism for the
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,
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is a form of therapy. People from all walks of life after a hectic workday listen to their favourite songs to release stress. Most importantly,
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has the power to heal patients from their illnesses as it is believed that the musical notes in a song create positive vibrations which help in coping with the illness. I am of the opinion that the traditional
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, as well as the world music each has its own charm and both,
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world
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each has its own charm and both are equally significant. Local
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of a region i.e. folk
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represents the social and cultural ethos of a nation, its indigenous tradition and can be a matter of extreme pride for a community.
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, in India
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every state has its indigenous folk tradition
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as be it
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in Gujarat, bhangra in Punjab or Baul in West Bengal, Lavani in Maharashtra.
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, every regional
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is important which indeed adds more colours and variety to the
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.
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, the universally played International
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plays a crucial role in unifying people from various corners of the globe.
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is because, in the current era of globalization, people are crossing geographical barriers for work or studies and in a way they can instantly connect with each other based on common songs.
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, many countries are inspired and influenced by international
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to create their own
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, international
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can aid in the harmonization and progress of an individual and society. In conclusion, life is unimaginable without
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as
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is the universal language that
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people of different caste, creed, gender and religion. It is important that we listen to propagate international
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as well as retain indigenous
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of a culture.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • emotional release
  • cultural significance
  • globalization
  • cultural exchange
  • technology
  • preservation
  • cultural heritage
  • social cohesion
  • expression
  • consumption
  • production
  • traditional music
  • international music
  • diversity
  • identity
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