Should private schools receive government funding? Give reasons for your answer, and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

With the increase in the tuition fees of private schools, the majority of the parents are forced to send their children to public
. In my opinion, I believe
schools must be preferred for
assistance in order to improve infrastructure facilities
of private institutions, as they are already well equipped and richer in terms of finance. Private institutes receive lots of funding from corporates and organisation and
from rich parents of kids who wish to provide the best facilities for their children at schools. Which says, they are well-established institutes with proper infrastructure and teaching staff.
, there is no point for the
to waste tax payer's money for private schools. Whereas, the majority of the population of a nation comprises of people from the weaker section, who are not enough financially sound to send their offspring to convent schools and prefers public
over it. But due to lack of infrastructure and qualified staff in public schools, their children are deprived of quality education and bright future.
For instance
, in India rural area children often face difficulties while studying in
-aided schools due to lack of facilities.
, the
must provide all the financial aid to the public
in order to make quality education accessible to all the students of the society. To conclude, one must help the needful, so
should prioritise public
while allocating funds over private schools. As there is no sense in making
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