Some people dislike changes in their society and in their own lives and want things to stay the same. Why do some people want things to stay the same? Why should change be regarded as something positive?
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's childhood and sometimes from negative experiences as an adult. In the event that a child experiences an accident and loses a family member during their childhood, they might choose not to drive when they reach adulthood. Adults who start a business and end up in bankruptcy usually do not start a new business and prefer to be hired by someone else and stay in their comfort zone. Another example is Use synonyms
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, if an employee gets a promotion, at the same with a heavier workload and change in the working environment, their quality of life would improve.
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Expand on your examples by explaining how they specifically relate to the question asked. This helps in reinforcing your argument and providing a more in-depth analysis.
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Try to include a wider range of linking phrases to help paragraphs flow more naturally and to demonstrate a higher level of language proficiency.
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While revisiting past experiences, connect these examples more clearly to the reasons why individuals prefer stability over change, to strengthen your argument.
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You used relevant examples to support your points, which helps in illustrating your arguments.
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite