In the future, it seems it will be more difficult to live on the earth. Some people think more money should be spent on researching other planets to live, such as Mars. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It will be more difficult to live on the

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in the future because of extreme

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environmental

destruction, globalisation and continues spreading of deadly diseases are the major reasons, which will make

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expectancy less on the

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future. While

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some people opine that

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should be spent on researching other planets to live. In my opinion,

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is not exactly a solution. I will support my stand with valid arguments in the following paragraphs.

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arth is the best place for humans to live

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because it contains

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roper atmosphere and it

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dequate amount of resources which is fulfiling humans need.

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,

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on the

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is getting difficult because of some critical reasons like

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estruction of forest which will affect us in

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carcity of rain, food and other commercial resources, thousands of people are dying because of

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eadly virus spreading all over the nation, lack of natural resources like minerals, fuels, petrol will make it difficult for people to live.

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, all these problems can be solved,

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overnment should spend

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in solving

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issues by

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people or investing more in

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ystem which will make humans

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easy on the

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instead

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of searching of new planets.

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, our government have already

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crores of

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on

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and space mission on researching of

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ew planet like mars, but still

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our experts are not up to any conclusion.

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approriate

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range of gases and resources but it needs to balanced and reformed, whereas, to find all

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naturals and minerals on mars will demand more

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in future.

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,

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should

be spend

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on the

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and find

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possible solutions by eradicating the harmful and hazardous activity.

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pread of

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on the

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leads to thousands of death worldwide,

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ation should spend

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on finding vaccination and save people's lives. In conclusion, there is no denying that

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will be difficult on the

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but the problems

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occurring

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can be resolved by monetary and nation-wide support, rather than migrating to the different planet.