In the future, it seems it will be more difficult to live on the earth. Some people think more money should be spent on researching other planets to live, such as Mars. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It will be more difficult to live on the
earth
in the future because of extreme
enivironmental
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environmental
destruction, globalisation and continues spreading of deadly diseases are the major reasons, which will make
life
expectancy less on the
earth
in the
near by
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future. While
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some people opine that
money
should be spent on researching other planets to live. In my opinion,
this
is not exactly a solution. I will support my stand with valid arguments in the following paragraphs.
Firstly
,
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arth is the best place for humans to live
life
because it contains
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roper atmosphere and it
also
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a
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dequate amount of resources which is fulfiling humans need.
Secondly
,
life
on the
earth
is getting difficult because of some critical reasons like
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estruction of forest which will affect us in
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carcity of rain, food and other commercial resources, thousands of people are dying because of
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eadly virus spreading all over the nation, lack of natural resources like minerals, fuels, petrol will make it difficult for people to live.
However
, all these problems can be solved,
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overnment should spend
money
in solving
this
issues by
awaring
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awarding
people or investing more in
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ystem which will make humans
life
easy on the
earth
instead
of searching of new planets.
On the other hand
, our government have already
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crores of
money
on
space craft
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and space mission on researching of
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ew planet like mars, but still
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our experts are not up to any conclusion.
Furthermore
,
earth
have
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approriate
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appropriate
range of gases and resources but it needs to balanced and reformed, whereas, to find all
this
naturals and minerals on mars will demand more
money
in future.
Thus
,
money
should
be spend
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on the
earth
and find
the
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possible solutions by eradicating the harmful and hazardous activity.
For example
,
s
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pread of
corona virus
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on the
earth
leads to thousands of death worldwide,
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ation should spend
money
on finding vaccination and save people's lives. In conclusion, there is no denying that
life
will be difficult on the
earth
but the problems
occuring
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occurring
this
can be resolved by monetary and nation-wide support, rather than migrating to the different planet.
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