Some people say that the bicycles are a good, modern means of transportation. Other say riding a bicycle has clear disadvantages. Discuss both viewpoints and give your own opinion.

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Few individuals believe, bicycles are new ,
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xcellent form of
transport
whereas, others believe riding cycles has limitations. In my opinion, bicycles are considered to be
afforable
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affordable
and modern means of travel . I will be highlighting the points, how bicycles are taken to the account of transportation in a better way, and at the same time
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drawbacks of the bicycles. Pedal cycles are considered to be
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ost
convienent
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convenient
and
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affordable
form of
transport
. The main reason is the
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maintenance
and repairs of the cycles are quite cheaper and
cost effective
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when compared to other vehicles . It is
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friendly to purchase a cycle. Pedal cycles can be used by irrespective of age, and needs no license is required to run
this
particular mode of
transport
.
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,people
also
consider it as a fitness regime.
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, people use cycles for their
excercise
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exercise
. it not only helps in work out ,and
moreover
helps them to keep fit There
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also
limitations in riding bicycles . It cannot be used for
longer
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distance
. It is always effective to be used for the shorter
distance
. Traveller
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to get tired, any physical injury or accidents for
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distance
usage .
Additionally
, riding a bicycle needs balance , misbalance of traveller would lead to accidents and injury .
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many cyclists lose their life due to improper balance or skid bicycles
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the roads. In
conculsion
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conclusion
, bicycles are
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heapest and less expensive modes of
transport
. it not only helps in improving the health of the traveller
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but
also
very
budget friendly
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. It can be used by any age group and no license is required using it.
however
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it cannot be used for the far
distance
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ajor chance of accidents with bicycles. I believe
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bicycles have more pros
then
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cons so it is one of the most effective
mode
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of
transport
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Environmental impact
  • Carbon footprint
  • Urban mobility
  • Cardiovascular exercise
  • Cost-effective
  • Traffic congestion
  • Cycling infrastructure
  • Road safety
  • Weather conditions
  • Sustainable transportation
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