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Whether or not a person achieves their aims in life is mostly related to luck. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

#person #life #luck
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Many people claim that
luck
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 plays the most instrumental role in helping them achieve their goals in life. Personally, I vehemently disagree with
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 notion as hard
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, determination and perseverance are more important factors than
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 for attaining different goals. There are multifarious reasons to strengthen my viewpoint.
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, there are several people who despite all odds reach the pinnacle of success through sheer dedication and hard
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.
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, late APJ Abdul Kalam faced so much hardship in his childhood;
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, he conquered all formidable challenges through untiring perseverance and grit. Needless to say, he achieved whatever he aimed at during his presidential tenure and in his scientific career.
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, anything which is achieved just through
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 does not
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 long unless achievers put in diligent efforts to sustain it. To illustrate, people open businesses for their children;
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, their businesses only grow if these children devote time and show dedication
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 their
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.
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, people may come into a lot of money due to sheer
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;
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, if they do not know how to invest that money, they will soon squander it.
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, there are people who are born with physical disabilities but still
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they have a success story to tell. Take,
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, Helen Keller who was deaf and blind, but with her determination and unparalleled efforts
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she became an eminent author and political activist.
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 she was not born with fortunes, she fought against all odds and became an epitome of hard
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 and determination. To conclude, I firmly reiterate that
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 does not play a major role in achieving success and factors
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 as perseverance, commitment and dedication are more imperative in attaining goals.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • luck
  • determination
  • hard work
  • perseverance
  • skills
  • continuous learning
  • achievements
  • opportunities
  • networking
  • personal accountability
  • diverse backgrounds
  • access to resources
  • causality
  • creative industries
  • structured fields
  • linear
  • predicated on merit
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