It is better if an extended family (for example, aunts, uncles, grandparents) are involved in a child’s upbringing than just parents alone. Do you agree or disagree?

The rising trend of nuclear families and it's

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ffect on today's children have pointed out a serious question whether the children should be raised in joint families, in which uncles, aunts and grandparents contribute in the upbringing of kids. I strongly believe that joint families are better in raising up children.

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, in the families where both the parents are office goers, the little ones are either left behind at home with an appointed servant maid or they are sent to

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, where there is a chance that the children are not treated or taken care well.

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happens mainly because of the reason that the family size is becoming less these days.

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, in case of an extended family, the parents may concentrate on their career goals without taking much tension on their kids. Each of the

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can take turns to feed and take care of the infants or children.

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, it is better for children to grow in a combined family.

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, the emotions and good behaviours among kids are cultivated from the infant age. when a child is raised with kiths, he or she inculcates many good habits like sharing, caring and love for each

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and there is a good chance that the child becomes selfless.

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would definitely help them when they marry and lead an

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life. For illustrate, one of my friends who was brought up by her grandparents

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is full of good values and

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motivates others to be in

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.In sum,

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ounger generation who are raised by their forefathers, are taught with a lot of sacraments and good beliefs. To summarise, kids raised in the extended families have more

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over the children brought up in nuclear families. They share the love and kindness of everybody in the family and they

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tend to reciprocate to others in the family and even in the society and thereby create a beautiful living environment.