In the modern world, it is no longer necessary to use animals and animal products for food, clothing and medicine. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give your opinion based on your knowledge and experience.
Nowadays, animals are widely used in many areas. Some people think it will be unnecessary to
use
them in the near future. I disagree with this
idea to a certain extent. While it is true that animal products can be replaced by synthetic products in the clothing industry, humans will still need animals for food and medical investigation.
We do find a lot of ways to avoid using animals. First
many types of alternative foods, invented by scientists, taste like meat but are made of soybeans. So people who eat these fake meat dishes can remain vegetarians and still get all the nutrients they need. Using animals for m
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a
checkup
is indeed cruel and immoral. After all, we do not have the right to kill other forms of life for our benefit. Fortunately, the use
of animals in medical checkup
and trials is decreasing rapidly. In the clothing industry, also
, it is now possible to avoid using animals. For example
, synthetic fur and synthetic silk look as good as the real thing and their production does not involve any cruelty to animals.
Even so, it is nearly impossible to stop using animals altogether. For example
, fish and meat are an integral part of many cuisines around the world. They are major sources of vitamins, minerals and proteins. Meat substitutes are usually expensive and hard to find in many markets. So, if people are told to stop using animal products, they may fail to get adequate nutrition. Likewise
, it is impossible to perform medical checkup
without using animals. Of course, this
use
is unethical and scientists are working hard to minimise the use
of animals, yet there is no justification for stopping the production of some crucial drugs just because their testing involves animals.
In summary, we need to respect animals’ right to live and reduce their use
for purposes of vanity; however
,we cannot avoid using them for meeting our nutritional requirements or performing medical checkup
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite