Most people do not care enough about environmental issues. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Although

, many people believe that the government and citizens are focusing more on the notion of saving the

environment

which is convincing. I think in a reverse manner and disagree with the given statement. My inclination towards

this

is justified in the ensuing paragraphs. Out of all the arguments the strongest one to prove my point is the increase in pollution. Be it air pollution, noise, or land, there is a massive increase in the numbers.

This

is to say, many big companies are still focusing on earning big,

instead

of focusing on the cause of the environmental disaster they are building. A good example of

this

can be seen in glass manufacturing companies.

This

type of companies exhaust massive pollutant in the air and release the remaining waste on the side land which never gets recycled.

Besides

this

, it is

also

true that we as citizens are

also

not very serious because we are still focusing on the question of what I or one person can change?

Instead

of taking steps towards saving the

environment

. The other reason to prove my point is that trees are still being cut for human benefits. Trees are the main source that produces oxygen and help in reducing carbon dioxide and other air pollutants.

However

, the great benefits of it are being lost under the umbrella or other human needs.

On the contrary

, some people

counter claim

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the mentioned support. The foremost argument they do is that the government is already started banning the companies producing the waste and impacting the

environment

. Along with that people

also

started understanding the cause and taking actions by simply recycling.

However

, the numbers are still very little to none.

Thus

, to wrap up the discussion, it can be said that there is still a lot need to be done to save our

environment

and us because if we do not take steps in

this

now

then

it might be

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late to even start.

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Introduction & conclusion present

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Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

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Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.5

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