Nowadays more and more business meetings and business trainings are taking place online. Does the advantage of this development outweigh disadvantage.

Many multinational companies or even small firms are using world wide web for their
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meetings and
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on various platforms like skype, workplace,
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and many
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. While
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it has multiple benefits as well as disadvantages. . I will support my stand with valid arguments in the following paragraphs.
Firstly
, almost all the companies have
internet
access and they use it for various tasks. At present, many companies have excelled their work and handling foreign clients by use of
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nternet, they probably do all kind of meetings on
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nternet because it saves their precious time and money.
Secondly
, with the use of
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small startups are
also
trying to give free sessions and
trainings
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on the
internet
and advertise their
business
.
For example
, Infosys, a multinational I.T company give free
business
trainings
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throughly
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on
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nternet and if anybody wants to collaborate with the company they can simply schedule meeting for expansion of
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usiness.
On the other hand
, there are
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ew disadvantages
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online meetings. Sometimes online gatherings can lead to fraud deal and they can cheat opposite end easily by fake documentation.
Furthermore
, discussing
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company's financial and confidential things online may lead to
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conomical loss.
However
, online
trainings
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are not effective as physical training, as people invest online for training and sometimes they may not get any acknowledgement
thus
there is always a trust issue and threat of cheating on online meetings and
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. In conclusion, there is no denying that online meetings may
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to many critical issues but, there are more
adavantages
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advantages
of using
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nternet in
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right way and excel their
business
by social gathering on it.
Thus
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dvantage of
this
development
outweigh
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isadvantage.
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