Some people believe that teaching children at home is the best for a child’s development while others think that it is important for children to go to school. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
It is often argued that homeschooling is best for
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although
traditional education
is the best option for children, homeschooling also
has benefits.
There are several reasons why people think that homeschooling is a better choice
. First
of all, thanks to homeschooling, parents could have greater autonomy and choice
over the curriculum, and the subjects studied. For example
, if the parents observe their child
's strengths, interest, they will choose some subjects in order to improve their child
's strengths. Moreover
, home education
helps parents and their children closer because it allows children and their parents spending much more time together. As a result
, it would promote a sense of belonging and children will develop personality, treat people in a
good behaviour.
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On the other hand
, I strongly believe that traditional schooling has a range of benefits and is the best choice
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first
reason is that children could become more sociable and friendly in traditional education
, learn how to work with their peers and soft skills such
as teamwork, and cooperation. Furthermore
, formal education
could teach children how to treat others in the best way and their attitude towards everyone because it is a typical small environment. Another point to consider is that many
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For example
, children could take part in many outdoor activities such
as observation in museums, school trips to some locations. Moreover
, children attend physical education
classes like basketball classes, swimming classes to promote their physical well-being.
To sum up, both homeschooling and traditional education
have their own merits. However
, it seems to me that going to regular school is much a better choice
than homeschooling because it provides better opportunities for children to improve themselves.Submitted by mmphuong191 on
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