Some people believe that teaching children at home is the best for a child’s development while others think that it is important for children to go to school. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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hild's development whereas other people believe that children going to traditional school are more effective. From my point of view,

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is the best option for children, homeschooling

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has benefits. There are several reasons why people think that homeschooling is a better

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of all, thanks to homeschooling, parents could have greater autonomy and

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over the curriculum, and the subjects studied.

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, if the parents observe their

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's strengths, interest, they will choose some subjects in order to improve their

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's strengths.

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, home

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helps parents and their children closer because it allows children and their parents spending much more time together.

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, it would promote a sense of belonging and children will develop personality, treat people in

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good behaviour.

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, I strongly believe that traditional schooling has a range of benefits and is the best

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hild's development. The

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reason is that children could become more sociable and friendly in traditional

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, learn how to work with their peers and soft skills

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as teamwork, and cooperation.

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, formal

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could teach children how to treat others in the best way and their attitude towards everyone because it is a typical small environment. Another point to consider is that

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pecialized curriculum which

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to the improvement of mental and physical health.

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, children could take part in many outdoor activities

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as observation in museums, school trips to some locations.

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, children attend physical

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classes like basketball classes, swimming classes to promote their physical well-being. To sum up, both homeschooling and traditional

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have their own merits.

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, it seems to me that going to regular school is much a better

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than homeschooling because it provides better opportunities for children to improve themselves.