Global warming is the one of the biggest threat to our environment. What causes global warming? What solutions are there to this problem?

The world is suffering a lot from global warming, there are many reasons behind the increase in earth's temperature. Greenhousehouse gasses

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as chlorofluorocarbons and other

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gas emission is very much responsible for it. I will discuss some possible solution to tackle it in

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essay. In spite of the scientist working out for finding a feasible way to manufacture all the things in a green way to protect our environment,we are failing miserably each year. As per scientists latest research on global temperature, it is revealed that our earth is getting warmer by 1% by each year.

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leads to many problems

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as seawater encroaching land and, acid rain. Global warming is caused by the depletion of the ozone layer. Ozone is a shield that protects our world from UV rays since the greenhouse-house gasses which are emitted to the atmosphere reacts with ozone and depletes it, we invite ultra-violet rays from the sun and it increases the global temperature indirectly. In order to reduce

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, we have to act as one family. Though items

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as refrigerators and air coolers are part of our life, we should try to live without them. Since they are responsible for the emission of greenhouse gasses in our atmosphere.

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, we should try to find an alternative for petrol, since burning petrol will

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fasten the depletion of the ozone layer.

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we should plant more trees to bring rain often to the land.

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will help us to reduce the phase at which our globe is getting warm. To conclude my argument, the government should act fast and should restrict the cutting of trees.

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be implemented.

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global warming
environmental degradation
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population growth
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Nowadays more and more people want to get things done instantly. Why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

More and more people now own cars. What are the problems associated with an increase in the usage of private cars? How can these problems be solved?

Some people believe that humans are damaging seriously the environment. what are the causes? what should people do to solve this peoblem?

In some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in fighting out about the history of the gouse or building they live in. What are the reasons for this? How can people research this?