Global warming is the one of the biggest threat to our environment. What causes global warming? What solutions are there to this problem?

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The world is suffering a lot from global warming, there are many reasons behind the increase in earth's temperature. Greenhousehouse gasses

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as chlorofluorocarbons and other

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gas emission is very much responsible for it. I will discuss some possible solution to tackle it in

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essay. In spite of the scientist working out for finding a feasible way to manufacture all the things in a green way to protect our environment,we are failing miserably each year. As per scientists latest research on global temperature, it is revealed that our earth is getting warmer by 1% by each year.

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leads to many problems

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as seawater encroaching land and, acid rain. Global warming is caused by the depletion of the ozone layer. Ozone is a shield that protects our world from UV rays since the greenhouse-house gasses which are emitted to the atmosphere reacts with ozone and depletes it, we invite ultra-violet rays from the sun and it increases the global temperature indirectly. In order to reduce

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, we have to act as one family. Though items

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as refrigerators and air coolers are part of our life, we should try to live without them. Since they are responsible for the emission of greenhouse gasses in our atmosphere.

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, we should try to find an alternative for petrol, since burning petrol will

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fasten the depletion of the ozone layer.

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we should plant more trees to bring rain often to the land.

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will help us to reduce the phase at which our globe is getting warm. To conclude my argument, the government should act fast and should restrict the cutting of trees.

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to that strict guidelines for the usage of greenhouse gasses should

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be implemented.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

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Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

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Task Achievement: 5.0

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Topic Vocabulary:

global warming
environmental degradation
climate change
greenhouse effect
carbon dioxide
methane
emissions
fossil fuels
deforestation
industrialization
livestock farming
population growth
waste management
volcanic eruptions
polar ice caps

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Global warming is the one of the biggest threat to our environment. What causes global warming? What solutions are there to this problem?

Your opinion

Money is important in most people’s lives. Although some people think it is more important than others. What do you feel are the right uses of money? What other factors are important for a good life?

Write your essay using all the notes and giving reasons for your point of view. ‘Young people need to keep up-to-date with the latest fashion in clothes.’ Do you agree?

Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. others ‚however, believe that school is the palce to learn this. discuss both these views and give your opinion.

One of your friends wants to apply for a job involving working with foreign teenagers. Write a letter of recommendation for him/her. You should write at least 150 words. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task

Some people say in order to prevent illness and disease, government should focus on reducing emvironmental pollution and housing problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree?