Some people believe that having sport in schools is a waste of time and resources, whilst other people believe that sport in schools is a vital part of education. Discuss both these views and give your opinion

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. The majority of people

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have time even for exercises as

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they are busy every day with their own

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dult population does not fall into

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habit. There are a

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of problems associated with living unhealthy, lacking exercises

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and most importantly,

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without physical exercises may result in

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igher risk of gaining diseases problem in early life. On

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side, many people

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have time for regular physical exercises because they get married, get children or start working. Despite having a gym

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to their home, they

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prefer to get trained at

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gyms are paid. Not all people want to spend their money

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gym subscription for a

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of financial reasons,

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, they may be saving money

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buying a house or a car.

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, not having any physical activity can lead to many uncomfortable circumstances for most people. If people

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do regular exercise their body becomes weak.

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, there are different problems results from lack of knowledge which may cause people

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urn to bad habit as far as today’s

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concerned and people are living ignorance

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. In order to turn tendency people to miss the physical exercises a

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of measures can be taken. Professional workers like employer and local communities must promote

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healthy

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and make it compulsory for everyone to exercise before starting a workday. More gyms should be built at corporations’ office so people commuting time reduces and gyms located

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city must be subsidized for

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ad economic situation. All these measures, if implemented will help increase

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umber of people attending to the gyms. All things considered; the sedentary

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is gaining popularity in

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modern societies.