Some people think that animals and animal products should be used for food, medicine and clothing. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give your opinions based on your knowledge and experiences.

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not the most-people believe that animal and animal products should be used in our meal, manufacturing drugs and clothing purposes. The opinion
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whether animal and animal products should be used in these purposes has been raised due to the adverse effects of
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on wildlife sustainability. I agree that
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the
use
of animal and animal products is important,
however
, a sensible approach should be adopted since
such
behaviour could encourage hunting animals and harm wildlife
detrementally
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detrimentally
. We
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largely on
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animal and animal products. Animal meat and milk are treated as a popular food habit in almost every culture.
In addition
to
this
, several animals are used widely for medical purposes to
treate
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treat
create
different diseases.
Furthermore
, the skin of animals
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used for clothing purposes as well.
Therefore
, our dependency on animal and animal products are multi-
dymentional
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dimensional
, which are significant and not easy to avoid. A more sensible approach
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should
would
be adopted on the usage of animals and animal products to ensure
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wildlife prevention. It is because many-if
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not all- animals are found rarely
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. If we decide to
use
them for luxury goods,
instead
of meeting the basic or
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requirments
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requirements
such
as dairy products, medicine, it would be harmful to their extinction.
Thus
, we need to be
consious
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conscious
and reassess the (excessive)
use
of animals and animal products. To sum up, we must accept the fact that the animal products are major raw materials of our food, medicine and clothing.
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, we cannot be free of these
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all of a sudden,
However
, responsible
use
may reduce the adverse effects, and people should be aware of it and
goveernmenet
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government
governments
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aw to stop
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veruse of animals and animal product.
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