In many places, new homes are needed, but the only space available for building them is in the countryside. Some people believe it is more important to protect the countryside and not build new homes there. What is your opinion about this?

In opposite to believing of some people, it is possible to live in countrysides, and at the same time, protect them. In my opinion, the way is to try to find options that can equilibrate the human need and maintaining natural resources. Some possible solutions can be
reforestation
, correct use of natural resources, and Education. The
first
key point is
reforestation
. When people decide to live in the countryside, some trees need to be removed,
then
it is important to plant new of them. To illustrate, in Brazil, when some Paper's industries remove some vegetation, they are obligated to plant a new one.
Additionally
, the
reforestation
can help to maintain the ecologic equilibrium in these areas. As an example, when new trees are planted, it is possible to preserve the life of a variety of animals that live there, like birds and monkeys.
Also
, the
reforestation
can help to
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agradable
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agreeable
climate.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Urbanization
  • Ecological benefits
  • Biodiversity conservation
  • Carbon sequestration
  • Sustainable development
  • Eco-friendly building materials
  • Green architecture
  • Government policies
  • Urban sprawl
  • Infrastructure
  • Smart planning
  • Agricultural lands
  • Rural areas
  • Population growth
  • Environmental sensitivity
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