Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmes (for example working for a charity, improving the neighbourhood or teaching sports to younger children). To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Education is not complete without building a sense of social responsibility among the

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children. Unpaid

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services could be a great way to teach them the duty towards the

community

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. I agree with the notion that

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services

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as working for a

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or teaching sports to younger children should be a

compulsary

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compulsory

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school

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program.

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, it will allow them to be considerate to each other.

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, by getting

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community

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work

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, students will learn to

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. Unpaid

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services should be a

compulsary

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compulsory

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of high

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programs as it will

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the students to be considerate to the fellow members of the

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. Several studies have found the importance of being an empathetic citizen for the welfare of the

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.

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- by working for an unpaid

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, students can arrange a

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activity to help people who are

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suffering

from natural calamities. In

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way

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they would learn about the problems of their fellow countrymen and extend help for them. Unpaid

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works

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a habit of

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among the students. Usually

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charity

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works

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arge number of students who will

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in a

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independently. For

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instance

, teaching sports to younger children requires a lot of

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work

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for those who are teaching as well as those young students who are learning.

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, through making these unpaid works as a compulsory

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urriculum, students are getting a chance to build the habit of working in

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roup. To conclude, through unpaid

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works, students will get more opportunities to develop as a responsible individual in the

community

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.

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, these free social works should be a

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school

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curriculum.

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, to ensure a nationwide implementation of

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policy required to raise awareness among the members of the

community

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.