Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmes (for example working for a charity, improving the neighbourhood or teaching sports to younger children). To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Education is not complete without building a sense of social responsibility among the

school going

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children. Unpaid

community

services could be a great way to teach them the duty towards the

community

. I agree with the notion that

community

services

such

as working for a

charity

or teaching sports to younger children should be a

compulsary

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compulsory

part

of

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igh

school

program.

Firstly

, it will allow them to be considerate to each other.

Furthermore

, by getting

invoved

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involved

with

such

community

work

, students will learn to

work

in

a groups

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. Unpaid

community

services should be a

compulsary

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compulsory

part

of high

school

programs as it will

trasnform

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transform

the students to be considerate to the fellow members of the

community

. Several studies have found the importance of being an empathetic citizen for the welfare of the

community

.

For example

- by working for an unpaid

charity

, students can arrange a

fund raising

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activity to help people who are

suffereing

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suffering

from natural calamities. In

this

way

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they would learn about the problems of their fellow countrymen and extend help for them. Unpaid

community

works

builds

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a habit of

group

work

among the students. Usually

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such

charity

works

needs

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arge number of students who will

work

in a

group

independently. For

instence

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instance

, teaching sports to younger children requires a lot of

group

work

for those who are teaching as well as those young students who are learning.

Therefore

, through making these unpaid works as a compulsory

part

of

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urriculum, students are getting a chance to build the habit of working in

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roup. To conclude, through unpaid

charity

works, students will get more opportunities to develop as a responsible individual in the

community

.

Therefore

, these free social works should be a

part

of

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school

curriculum.

Furthermore

, to ensure a nationwide implementation of

such

policy required to raise awareness among the members of the

community

.