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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You are going on a month training programme to the UK and know that the head of the course would like one of the participants to be the social events' organiser. Write a letter to the Training Organiser. In your letter • expressing your interest in the role • requesting more information about it • explaining what experience you have Begin your letter as follows: Dear ..., You should write at least 150 words.

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Dear Rob, I am one of the
particpants
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participants
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month long
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 training programme which is being organised by you in the UK. While navigating
throught
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 the training website, it came to my notice that you would like one of the
participant
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 to be the social events' organiser. I am writing to you to express my interest
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 the role. I was wondering if you could provide me
more
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 details regarding the
event
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 that would be organised. Information
such
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as
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 what
occassion
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occasion
 or affair the
event
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 would be planned, how many people
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 of what age group would be taking part in it. These details would make it easier to comprehend the roles and
responsibilies
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responsibilities
 of the
event
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 organiser. Here are some details regarding my background in the terms of
event
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 organising, during my college years I have gained quite a substantial experience as I was part of the
culutral
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cultural
 club as well as prom
committie
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committee
. As a class representative, I was always at the
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fore-front
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forefront
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 when it came to planning, decorating and managing an
event
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.
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, at my
workplace
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 I am always the one to initiate and plan for the office parties or the
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Friday
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 fun games. Looking forward to hearing back from you soon. Yours Faithfully, Srishti

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