Crime appears to be rising in most countries in the world, especially among young people. Identify the possible causes of this trend, and propose some solutions you think would be effective.
Many states around the globe are suffering from a growing crime commitment level where criminals quite often the young. The roots of
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appear to be focused on three areas, and a number of solutions Linking Words
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appear to be possible.
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first
factor is that nowadays television and internet videos have more criminal and cruel content. Linking Words
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pattern appears to be global, with the result that children start to copy what they have seen. Another cause is the lack of parenting, Linking Words
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, a child perhaps is not aware of what is black and what is white. Linking Words
for example
, in the store, if parents didn’t buy a toy for their treasure, Linking Words
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toy without considering he committed a small crime. A Linking Words
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factor is that excess of free time makes teenagers naughty and licentious, Linking Words
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recreation time converts to tedious one, Linking Words
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, to make fun they do criminal activity.
Turning to possible solutions, an obvious step would be tracking of all TV content by a government, Linking Words
moreover
, for video owners on the Internet make fines if there is prohibited material on their channel. A Linking Words
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remedy might be solved by encouraging parents to educate their kin. A government ought to arrange an annual competition on the social studies knowledge between children and the family of a winner should be prized. Linking Words
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, children themselves should perhaps be more interested in extracurricular activities Linking Words
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as sports, arts, and music clubs, by doing Linking Words
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they would contribute to their intelligence.
In conclusion, the number of committed youngsters crimes significantly increasing around all countries. Reduction of crime information on TV and internet and awarding parents by the government, Linking Words
besides
dedicating one’s to sports, music, and art activities may well lessen teenager offence.Linking Words
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