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Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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,
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estitute lifestyle, while some people suggest that improvement of those situations is better. From my perspectives, I believe
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such
 situations is more beneficial. The main advantage of accepting a bad
situation
 is the cultivation of fortitude and optimism. As people accept situations of unsatisfactory job or shortage of money, they can control their desires well,
such
 as for fancy clothes, and be tough, which is of the beneficial and rare characters.
In addition
, people
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 even able to experience worse situations, because they may be familiar with
such
 situations.
By contrast
, It may be deleterious for people to accept those situations, while it is better to alter
such
 situations positively. There is an old say, ‘water goes down, but people go to higher position and status.’ Ambition is one of
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lements that people survive, most people
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 to have an affluent lifestyle,
thus
, they have to change the bad
situation
,
instead
 of acceptation. From my view, I believe that people should make forward progress in their life and career for the purpose of better living standard.
Moreover
, living in a bad
situation
 for a long time is likely to be detrimental for people, which may be self-defeating, leading to
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ven worse
situation
. In conclusion,
although
 accepting a bad
situation
 can be a kind of exercise on people’s characteristics and inner will, I tend to believe it is better to attempt to change the
situation
 and improve it as people are willing to enjoy a satisfactory and quality life.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • adversity
  • resilience
  • stoicism
  • contentment
  • cope
  • adapt
  • endure
  • persevere
  • settle
  • ambition
  • tenacious
  • determined
  • resourceful
  • optimistic
  • self-improvement
  • proactive
  • initiative
  • transform
  • overcome
  • confront
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