In some countries, young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies. Discuss the adavantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this.

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Many students who have completed their university studies find difficulty in landing in a
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. They lack clarity in their
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of study. As per my opinion, before joining the university they have to work for at least a year to avoid
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problem.
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I don't agree with some others who say it is not necessary to work before higher studies, On one hand, students who have an interest in a particular
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can at least work for a year to gain some basic knowledge about that
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. It would be beneficial for them to understand the basic function of that
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, it helps them to to get a good clarity about the subject, and it will help them in getting a well-paid
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. As per the latest survey by a
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search website called Indeed.com, most of the HR's prefer students with previous experience either full time or part-time.
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to that,they are ready to give 15% more pay than the other students who don't have any experience. Though there are more benefits in doing a
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or experiencing life through travel before going for higher studies, some parents feel that they are wasting their children's time.
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, they want their children to spend more time on their studies.
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parents wish seems to be good,
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will definitely hamper the student's ability to identify a
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. With the help of training and
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lear understanding of the
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nature, there is a big chance for a student to become an entrepreneur. Consider a student who works after his diploma and gains skill, he will be considered for a lateral entry in many colleges and they are hired by most of the companies faster than other students since they have more skill and knowledge. To conclude my arguments, I feel working and gaining knowledge about the
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of study before doing a degree gives them more clarity in studies as well as how well they can perform in office and there are only some negligible disadvantages.
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